To begin with the visual that Jayden started with was a picture of the sky and trees. The first kaleidoscope looks very similar to some ones dark feelings. The second one seems to show fire or a hot sunny day. The last kaleidoscope seems to catch my eye because the way that u construct the kaleidoscope was impressive because the coloring is perfect and looks like it’s a cool off day. The shapes that you use to design each kaleidoscope was very amazing because they all look different. The coloring that you use in all was nice because it brings out the pictures. The strongest of the three artwork was the second kaleidoscope because the way you constructed it and the colors that you use was very strong. The thing that should be improve is the first one because the color you use didn’t match the other picture. If you change the color it would be a strong piece of your project.
The visuals that Jayden created are all Kaleidoscopes. They all required perfect symmetry in order to look great. The picture started as a tree and skyline. The kaleidoscopes all include dark colors and then some type of brighter color in order to create good contrast. Each piece had black in it and then another color like blue or a light red. The 3 strongest parts of Jayden's art work are the contrast between the colors, the shapes he used in his symmetry, and how he put a completely different color at the center of the picture that attracts my attention. I really enjoy looking at all 3 pieces but something that needs to be improved on is the first picture because the "orangish" color doesn't really go with the black, but besides that, everything else is great.
Effort: 4 Composition/Symmetry:4 Submission of all work:4 Craftsmanship:1.5 (too many gaps) Artist Reflection: 0 (missing, do for full credit) 13.5/20= 77%
To begin with the visual that Jayden started with was a picture of the sky and trees. The first kaleidoscope looks very similar to some ones dark feelings. The second one seems to show fire or a hot sunny day. The last kaleidoscope seems to catch my eye because the way that u construct the kaleidoscope was impressive because the coloring is perfect and looks like it’s a cool off day. The shapes that you use to design each kaleidoscope was very amazing because they all look different. The coloring that you use in all was nice because it brings out the pictures. The strongest of the three artwork was the second kaleidoscope because the way you constructed it and the colors that you use was very strong. The thing that should be improve is the first one because the color you use didn’t match the other picture. If you change the color it would be a strong piece of your project.
ReplyDeleteThe visuals that Jayden created are all Kaleidoscopes. They all required perfect symmetry in order to look great. The picture started as a tree and skyline. The kaleidoscopes all include dark colors and then some type of brighter color in order to create good contrast. Each piece had black in it and then another color like blue or a light red. The 3 strongest parts of Jayden's art work are the contrast between the colors, the shapes he used in his symmetry, and how he put a completely different color at the center of the picture that attracts my attention. I really enjoy looking at all 3 pieces but something that needs to be improved on is the first picture because the "orangish" color doesn't really go with the black, but besides that, everything else is great.
ReplyDeletemine are better
ReplyDeleteEffort: 4
ReplyDeleteComposition/Symmetry:4
Submission of all work:4
Craftsmanship:1.5 (too many gaps)
Artist Reflection: 0 (missing, do for full credit)
13.5/20= 77%